Pedro Páramo and Negative Space

Saturday, 31 March 2007 by Ortizzle

Years ago I read a fascinating book called Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain. One of the concepts the author used to teach people to draw more accurately was a well-known technique in art called “negative space.”  The classic example of this is the drawing below:

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Looking at the “positive space” you see a goblet. But if you study the “negative” or black space, you will observe the silhouettes of two faces.  By concentrating on the background, or the “filler” spaces that surround the subject of a drawing or painting, we often see an entirely different facet of something that we would not have noticed otherwise.

It struck me, in learning that Rulfo eliminated so much of the content of his original version of Pedro Páramo, that his massive pruning of the novel was a way of using negative space in writing.  By removing the guiding authorial voice, as well as countless detailed explanations, he gives readers the license to fill in the gaps with what they imagine might lie among the shadows of the living and the dead, what might be grasped from peering underneath or behind the voices and events that fill this enigmatic work. Whatever the reader comes up with, it seems fair to assume that Rulfo wanted to encourage individual interpretations by not spelling everything out.

One clear example is Padre Rentería. In an article by Julio Moguel in La Jornada Semanal, I discovered that Rulfo eliminated over 100 pages related to Rentería. An interesting fact that disappeared was that Rentería was actually (one of) Pedro Páramo’s illegitimate children.  One more bit of juicy gossip?  Yes.  But had Rulfo left that in his novel, readers might have focused too strongly on the symbolism of the village priest being the illegitimate son of its patricarchal despotic ruler (the “goblet” in the picture) and less on other more personal facets of his character, such as the mental anguish that Rentería suffered in trying to reconcile his religious beliefs with the behavior of his parishioners and vice-versa (the ”silhouettes” in the picture.) What is not said in Pedro Páramo is often more intriguing (and more useful) in constructing this complex story in our minds, and trying to decide where it is leading us. If indeed it even wants to lead us. Perhaps it just wants us to sense the essence of what was, is, and might be within the myriad of negative spaces it offers.  

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Endgame and Bomb Shelters

Wednesday, 21 March 2007 by Ortizzle

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Random thoughts on this week’s reading…

*I started reading Endgame during Spring Break.  The fact that I was violently ill with a stomach virus did not help matters any; reading existentialist writing is about as uplifting as stepping in dog poop.  Sorry. 

*Cogito ergo sum. If we take Descartes’ famous statement, “I think, therefore I am,” and existentialize it, perhaps it could be “I don’t think; I simply am.”  Or perhaps “I don’t think, but I want to think that I can think, because otherwise I would shoot myself in the foot.”

*Even though I found Endgame immensely depressing in its overall message, I love that Beckett loved language. I enjoy reading authors who enjoy playing with words.  Beckett’s economy with words makes the impact of what he writes even greater. 

*Favorite repetitive lines:  (Clov, p. 73) ‘Sometimes I wonder if I’m in my right mind. Then it passes over and I’m as lucid as before.’  (…)  Sometimes I wonder if I’m in my right senses. Then it passes and I’m as intelligent as ever.’ 

*NAGG and NELL:  Regardless of whether they are the nails getting hammered by Hamm, they are more alive in their decrepit senile state, living in the dustbins, than Hamm and Clov could ever be.  I think that was on purpose.  Beckett’s little glimmer of hope (irony?) in a sea of  disillusionment.  Consider this:

                 NELL:  I am going to leave you.

                NAGG:  Could you give me a scratch before you go?

                NELL:  No.  (pause) Where?

That was Beckett defining marriage in three lines.  (O.K., just kidding.) But those two are the dearest to my heart in this theatre of the absurd because, while they emit absurd, contradictory thoughts, there is an underlying sentiment of… sentiment.  Nagg and Nell are, symbolically, that little candle in the darkness.  Their relationship is no longer functional: they live in separate dustbins.  But they continue trying to revive a time when there was some sort of meaning to their lives. Nell is the most realistic, acknowledging that there is no longer any point in carrying on as a couple: “I am going to leave you.”  But even she seems to cling to the need for a human relationship, expressed so wonderfully in two words when she responds to Nagg’s request for a scratch: “No.” … “Where?”  What will she find if she abandons him and goes off into the unknown?  The human need to feel “needed” is difficult to escape. 

*What is outside those windows?  Maybe this?   

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The summer that I turned ten, my father built a bomb shelter in our basement.  This was right before the Cuban Missile Crisis was about to erupt.  (Alas, I am that old.) We lived fairly close to Washington, D.C.  and we were not the only people in the neighborhood building a bomb shelter.  I remember helping stock the shelter with canned food, blankets, etc. My brothers and sister and I “played house” in the bomb shelter when it was finished. I think we did this partly because it seemed fun, like a little toy house that was all ours.  I also think we did it because it was too awful to think of the real purpose of that bomb shelter. I never talked about it, but in the back of my mind, I began having horribly depressing thoughts about what the world outside that bomb shelter would look like if we ever did have to use it.  A bleak grey image of barren wasteland, much like the illustration above, crept into a corner of my brain and it has been there ever since.  That image kept resurfacing over and over again as I read Endgame.  Maybe it would have helped me when I was a kid if I had just said to myself, “Isn’t life absurd?”  If I had been more mentally prepared to accept the fact that the human race had achieved the technological means to wipe itself off the face of the map in one fell swoop, I probably would have accepted that fact as the ultimate absurdity of life.  But I am an incurable optimist.  And so I say to you, “Where do you want me to scratch?”  Or as the popular saying goes, “You scratch my back, and I’ll scratch yours.”

Flaubert: Setting the Scene

Sunday, 25 February 2007 by Ortizzle

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“To be stupid, and selfish, and to have good health are the three requirements for happiness, though if stupidity is lacking, all is lost.” –Gustave Flaubert

In my Internet perusal of things related to Monsieur Flaubert, I came across the above quotation.  It is no doubt well-known among scholars, or certainly among scholars of Flaubert. For me, it sums up very well the characterization of the anti-hero of L’Éducation Sentimentale, Frédéric Moreau.

I spent probably the entire first half of the reading of this novel desperately waiting for Frédéric to exhibit at least a morsel of some redeeming quality.  I thought to myself: “He will grow up, he will learn from his mistakes, he will take stock of what he has, cut his losses, move on, learn from his suffering, become a sympathetic character who, even if he continues to be a ”loser” in the eyes of society, will still become something of a success, even if it is in only in having a more mature outlook on life, in defending his beliefs, or in doing something entirely selfless in order to make someone else happy.” I waited in vain.  And I foolishly became concerned about it. Because I am a hopeless romantic, and I wanted this guy to succeed somehow, somewhere, some way, however insignificant that way might be. 

All week I have been thinking about that, and what I would write for my blog entry this week. The above quote, and also something brought out by Professor Pelletier, offered me a way of reconciling my natural instincts as a reader:

1. The Quote:  Over and above the obvious cynicism of the remark, this quote encompasses Frédéric’s situation perfectly, although, it of course depends largely on our definition of happiness. 

Clearly, at the end of the novel, no one could say that Frédéric was happy in the traditional sense of having a life that was fulfilling, in which he felt proud of his accomplishments and satisfied with the results of his labors.  We must consider, therefore, the moment that he and Deslauriers chose to define as “the best time they ever had” which was a youthful faux pas in which they attempted to demonstrate their manhood by darkening the doors of a local brothel and ended up fleeing the scene, unable to literally consummate their adventure.

Why would they deem this to be such a good time, over and above anything else they had experienced in subsequent years?  The key, I believe, lies in our interpretation of ”being stupid.”  Flaubert, in his quote, perhaps meant it to be “ignorant” in every sense of the word, incapable of intelligent analysis, but if we interpret “stupid” as ”ingenuous” or “naive” it gives us a whole new perspective on the situation: Frédéric and Deslauriers may well have considered this the happiest time of their lives because their delight in the unknown, and their ignorance of the consequences represented a certain state of happiness (ignorance is bliss) to which they were never able to return. In the more cynical interpretation of Flaubert’s quote, their lives after that were marked by many “stupid” decisions which lacked the ingenuousness of that one particular event which they so cherished, decisions which were “stupid” in the more cognitive sense of being “ill-advised” and therefore did not have a happy end result in the sense of  “innocence.”

2.  Style:  After listening to the lecture given by Professor Pelletier, a lot of things “coagulated” in my mind regarding Realism, Flaubert, etc. The one remark that helped me really appreciate and put into perspective L’Éducation Sentimentale as a literary work, however, was Dr. Pelletier’s comment that “Style is everything.”  Consider this: Flaubert spent seven years writing this novel. SEVEN YEARS.  He wasn’t just worried about the occasional turn of phrase, he wanted le mot juste for everything he expressed.  That gave me a whole new perspective, or rather, a whole new place to take my appreciation of this novel. 

The stately homes, the streets of Paris, the restaurants and taverns: Flaubert takes you there.  His descriptions of people and places take on a whole new meaning… or lack of it. It matters not that any one character was a role model, that is not the point. The point is that we are transported to that time through prose that is sheer poetry. The characters are not “plot devices”… they are blank canvases upon which Flaubert paints scene after scene of what the people and places of this historical time suggested to him. Or at least that is the way I see it now. 

I know this is treading dangerously close to the forbidden topic of “authorial intent” but that’s not really where I am going. In no way do I presume to comment on Flaubert’s intent in writing the novel.  My point here is that if style was such an important consideration for Flaubert, then the interpretation of his text takes on a whole new dimension, and liberates the reader from looking for heroes, role models, and morals which were, precisely, probably never intended. 

Flaubert states at one point in the novel that Frédéric “felt an urge to escape the world he was in, and to attach himself to something.” Apart from being very typical of Frédéric, who was a true chameleon, changing his mind with the whim of the moment, I believe that also represents a common thread throughout the story which may have been part of the mentality of the times: most of the characters were looking for an escape from the drudgery or pain of the situation they were involved in, and “attaching” themselves to another person or idea or political persuasion was their way of feeling that they were active participants in the drama that surrounded them, and gave them a sense of self-importance they may not otherwise have had.  Whether these people were superficial or ineffectual is immaterial. What matters is the wide-angle camera lens that Flaubert uses to give us an appreciation of that historical period.